Monday, April 7, 2008

Peaceful Minds by KODA




My youngest daughter, Hannah wrote this poem. She uses two words, "eyes" and "see".
It's great for Deaf, KODA, CODA, and even for hearing people, too. Enjoy her poem!

Peaceful Minds

Though as important the eyes may be,
Only your loving heart can see,
For those who dream in bed,
They are peaceful,
And do not fret,
Words do not come from the mouth,
Nor do your feet walk down south,
The words you see come from the mind,
And feet walk on the path they find,
So love you shall,
And be a pal.


Written by Hannah (10-year-old)
This photo by Mischuge

6 comments:

Becky said...

It is beautful poem. I like it. Tell Hannah keep it up. Smile Becky

Deb Ann said...

Hi Becky,

I'll tell Hannah that. Thank you!

drmzz said...

Awesome. She picks up from her mom. ;) Keep on reading and writing.

Fairlady said...

Aww, I like that. She does write very well.. Tell her to keep it up.. :)

Deb Ann said...

Thank you, Drmzz and fairlady.

You brought Hannah a million yard smile!

My oldest daughter, Tami writes very well in poems/poetry, too.

Becky said...

Hi, my son George read Hannah's poem and he says wow, it is nice poem. He says he did write poems few times at school and he doesnt do poems so good. LOL
Becky